The 3-Act Paradigm at Work: The Ice Storm
written by James Schamus
The Ice Storm is a family drama set against
a particular time in America, the early 1970s, when some in the middle class
was experimenting with sex in a carry-over from the 60s. Shaped with rich
images and ensemble stories, the movie has the feel of "an art film" and
its structure is looser than in many films -- but clear and strong
nontheless.
Structural Analysis
- Hook (0 min.)
- A visual hook, an image: a train stuck in an ice storm, powerless
and coated with ice. The power returns. An icecycle drops. The train
slowly picks up speed. This image is at the heart of the meaning of our
story, a visual metaphor for it.
- Complication (3-4, 12, 16 min.)
- The focus is on a family: husband, wife, son, daughter. We meet each
early and each presents a complication: the son, away at school, has a
roommate who sleeps with every girl he gets interested in (3-4 min.).
The wife rejects the husband's amorous advance (12 min.). The daughter
shoplifts (16 min.).
- Call to Action (12 min.)
- The husband's journey drives the story. With this focus, the
complication above also is the call to action, his attempt to reestablish
a sexual relationship with his wife. As we shall see, there are reasons
for her rejection.
- Act One Plot Point (37 min.)
- Finally his wife accepts an amorous advance, and they make love.
This is unusual enough that the daughter later takes note of the wrinkled
sheets. In this dysfunctional marriage, the "extraordinary" world is what
in a normal marriage would be ordinary.
- Midpoint Plot Point (54, 62 min.)
- The wife learns of her husband's affair. And his lover rejects him.
They are scheduled to go to a holiday party, where "the key game" is going
to be played (a woman goes home with the man whose keys she draws from a bowl).
- Act Two Plot Point (85, 92 min.)
- The husband is drunk at the key game. When his recent lover draws
the keys of a young man, he tries to object and falls over. His wife goes
off with the husband of his recent lover but returns to the house after
quick sex to help her husband. They must talk tomorrow. Does their marriage
have a future?
- Climax and Resolution (92-106 min.)
- The son of the couple involved above (the recent lover, the quickie
partner) gets electrocuted in an ice storm the night of the key game. The
husband finds him. He takes him home. Then they go to pick up their own
son, returning from his date in NY (where his roommate showed up to ruin
it) but delayed by the ice storm. The image that began the movie is this
moment, the train starting after a power shortage, the return home. In the
car, seeing his son alive, realizing what he has and how much his behavior
has put in jeopardy, the husband breaks down and cries. The ice of his
heart has begun to melt. The film is over.
Notes
This film is based on Rick Moody's novel, which also explains its looser
structure -- adaptations almost always have less focus than an original
film story since the writer tries to include as much as possible from the
original source.
This is a dark comedy -- there are many very funny, satiric moments -- and
the journey of the husband, from aloofness to grief and a realization of
how precious his family is to him, keeps this story from too much sprawl.
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